Tuesday, December 16, 2014

External Guest Critique

Guest: Stuart Godwin - creative director from Cheil

There are some things that I should take note in my artefact.

1. Social Media

In the landing page, there should be a link that directs to a page that describes and shows the progress of my FYP. It could be a written link or a clickable link.

2. Kids are smarter than we think they are

The interaction is not necessary to be very simple, it can be slightly complicated as kids are not as stupid as we think. Kids loves to explore new things, they will click and see anything they saw that is moving or interesting.

3. Adding more sounds and animations

Kids love hearing sounds. If they click something, it gives feedback like sound and animation, this will encourage them to continue clicking . It will indirectly guide them to click.

4. Slight gruesome plot twist that surprise the kids.

It is nice to see there is a plot twist at the end that shows a surprising ending which will makes the kid excited to see something unexpected.

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